Wednesday, 30 March 2016

Beau

Beau

My little brother is tall (for his age), really big and bulky and really funny.
His chunky belly dangles over his waistline. He can dunk a basketball in his little baby hoop. If he has done something wrong, like he wees on the floor, he would try to cover it up with a blanket or a cushion. He gets told that if he eats his dinner, his muscles will get big. He has an attitude which is usually all happy and funny, but if you put one foot in his bad side, he will raise his voice, charge at you like an elephant and worst of all… Try to beat you up.
But sometimes he can be a really funny and cute. And that is my little brother.


6 comments:

  1. I like it how you used the word chunky it sounds funny. I can relate to that because my little cousin Izzi would always poke out her tummy and I would always laugh.

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  2. I like it how you used the word elephant. I can relate to that because i have a little cousin called Ben, When ever I say charge Ben he will always try to tackle me. He's only 2 though.

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  3. Good story Jett I like when you said chunky, big and bulky it reminds me of my brother i loved your story because it was funny story bro

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  4. I like how you put his chunky belly dangles over his waistline

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  5. great story Jett i like the way you put an image in our heads. There is lots of good detail in this story. I like the great words you used in this story for e.g. big and bulky or he charges at me like an elephant. when you said he is tall for my age i can relate to that my brother is only 7 and he is almost as tall as me. Thank you for sharing this amazing description with all of us.

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  6. Well done Jett! Your storey put a image in my head and I really liked the bit when you said that if you has done something wrong he tries to cover it that made me laugh.

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