Tuesday, 26 May 2015

Autumn leaves

Autumn Leaves


When the leaves fall they slowly sway side to side,

as they gently swirl around,

like a merry-go-round.


The leaves crunch when you leap on them

like a hungry man chomping at some crackers.


Autumn leaves are green, brown, yellow

like a burger with lettuce and mustard.


Autumn leaves slowly die over time

like a man fades and dies from old age.


They can be round, pointy, big or small,

Pretty much any shape at all.


By Jett and Joe

3 comments:

  1. I liked how you said the leaf goes like a merry go round and the leaf green brown and yellow like a burger keep up the good work

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  2. This is great poetry Jett lots of humour and discription I can't wait to read your next story

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  3. Wow a great pice of descriptive writing well don

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