Tuesday, 26 May 2015

Autumn leaves

Autumn Leaves

When the leaves fall they slowly sway side to side,

as they gently swirl around,

like a merry-go-round.

The leaves crunch when you leap on them

like a hungry man chomping at some crackers.

Autumn leaves are green, brown, yellow

like a burger with lettuce and mustard.

Autumn leaves slowly die over time

like a man fades and dies from old age.

They can be round, pointy, big or small,

Pretty much any shape at all.

By Jett and Joe


  1. I liked how you said the leaf goes like a merry go round and the leaf green brown and yellow like a burger keep up the good work

  2. This is great poetry Jett lots of humour and discription I can't wait to read your next story

  3. Wow a great pice of descriptive writing well don